Editing, The Chicken Garden Analogy

 

So you’ve battled through the winter of your writing and you can finally breath a sigh of relief.  Your story lays stretched out before you, complete.  You have entered the final keys strokes, and your garden is green and lush and springing to life, the buds of your story beginning to bloom.  Your plot is growing roots, and your characters are shining in the sunlight.

YAY! All the snow is finally gone!

But wait, you notice flaws in your story, your precious garden.  That’s okay, you tell yourself, it just needs a little editing.  So you roll up your sleeves, dig out your tools and start the process with the best intentions.

There’s an old proverb, “The road to hell is paved with good intentions.”

grass will choke out all the native plants. Must eradicate it early in the season

You find invasive weeds in your garden in the form of plot holes and bad grammar.  You set to work immediately routing them out with a spade.

Fireweed is another if left to itself will completely take over a garden

Oh no!  They’re everywhere!  Even more weeds in the form of passive voice construction and dead-end characters.  What the heck?  I thought I was a good writer!

It spreads through the ground via its roots, like, well, fire.

An outhouse?  Of course, there’s an outhouse.  This is total c$@&!

Yes, that is a rubber chicken on the outhouse. I’ll explain some other blog.

Why did I put a big shiny piece of metal in my garden?  There was a point to this right?  How did this fit into the story again?

This is a sculpture my husband created out on our land.

Who the heck do I think I am?  Oh yeah, that’s right, I’m a writer.

After a while, I think you can get so absorbed in the tiny flaws that you lose focus of the big picture.  You have created something with a vision, a purpose in mind.

Take a deep breath, step back and put down the rake.

Me, in front of the cabin before we had windows

 

Have a drink with a friend

 

Me and my father-in-law Shep, having a beer at the bar in Chicken, AK

Call in a professional if you can.

 

My biggest critic and writing buddy.

Don’t lose perspective!

 

This was a shot I took September of 2017. This is the view from the front porch of our cabin.

 

But most of all, remember, you’ve created a place that people are going to want to hang out and enjoy.  Don’t be so hard on it that you destroy it before it has a chance to really flourish.