My Review of The Darkness Within

by Michael Nadeau, Sequel to The Darkness Returns

Though he provides a brief synopsis at the beginning of what has transpired in the previous book, without missing a beat, Michael brings us right back to where we left off in the land of Lythinall. And in doing so, we start the story with a battle between a Dar’Krist and a dragon.

The action doesn’t stop there. When we left our heroes in the Darkness Returns, they had just faced off against a Wolvren, with Rhoe severely wounded. They’ve been taken to River Vale to be healed before continuing on their way home to Everknight.

New Characters

Michael introduces some new and unique characters in his sequel.

Trashcan-guy

Spoiler alert: this ain’t going to be an easy journey. Treachery awaits around every bend. And new characters come out of the woodwork, or in this case out of the trash pile to assist them on their way. The mysterious recluse Graf who at first appears to be just some crazy, ragged, smelly homeless guy, saves Allissanna (Liss) from assassins and become and unwilling recruit in getting them to Everknight in one piece. As with many of Michael’s characters, he is much more than he seems.

Evil Queen

A new villain joins the pantheon. It would appear that the awakening of the evil incarnation Dar’Krist is being orchestrated by a legendary elf-queen to the south. I’ll leave most of the details and description out, but I have to admit I liked her style. She reminded me of Salma Hayek’s Vampire in From Dusk til Dawn, when she pushes George Clooney to the floor and tells him he’s going to be her dog, and his name will be Spot. He establishes right away that this chick means business, and the word ‘empathy’ is not in her vocabulary. But my intuition tells me that her plan to control Dar’Krist isn’t going to pan out the way she thinks.

Sexy Bard

Jenna the Bard, appears on the scene. One of the things I like most about Michael’s fantasy is that it includes unique magical characters. They’re not the typical elves, orcs and trolls (though worls has some of that too). In this case, Jenna is a bard and a warrior on a mission, but you also quickly realize she’s something more. I’ll let you read and find out what. Her side quest to seduce Karsis cracked me up. I was waiting for Karsis to just tell her, “Look, I’m not a piece of meat!”

Character Development

Most of the other characters take a back seat in this story, but Liss is pushed to the forefront as she realizes that leadership isn’t as glamourous and easy as the songs and stories make it out to be. While she’s still rash and impulsive at times, she learns to consider others as she leads the group of refugees toward Everknight, knowing that they are being pursued all along the way. I feel Michael does a credible job here as she doesn’t lose her underlying temper/impulsive nature instantly, she is still slowly learning to control it.

Pacing

Michael sets a fast pace with this story, with non-stop action. The sequence with Karsis and Caerlyn fighting the Demon is pretty epic. Almost more Dreampunk than fantasy. And we finally get the big reveal on who/what Karsis is. There was one point, I thought for sure Rhoe had naively screwed up (won’t spoil it, but I was saying in my head, don’t fall for it—he’s the villain, doh!). My one hesitation is that at times the story felt compressed. He has several complex plot lines and character arcs going on. I would like to have seen more emotion and detail at times, and I was left saying to myself, “wait that’s it?”. He has enough here that I felt it could have been split into two stories with ease. Don’t get me wrong, this is in no way going to deter me from reading the last book, because I just have to find out how he’s going to wrap this up. More the difference between four and five stars.

If you’re looking for fast paced, high fantasy, check out Micahel Nadeau’s The Darkness Within. You’ll enjoy his complex world of Lythinall and his cast of compelling characters.

Thanks for reading! Stay tuned. My next reviews in the queue will be Danielle Anacona’s By Immortal Honor Bound, and Beth Anderson’s The Vine Eater. I will also be catching up on some of our projects from this summer. In the meantime, if you are looking for a great horror read in time for the season of darkness, my own Alaska backcountry horror novella, The Dark Land is available on Amazon.

The legend of Alaska’s Headless Ravine is steeped in blood. It’s hunger for human flesh never sleeps, even in the deepest cold of winter. Courage, skill and love will be tested to the limits on the isolated trails of The Dark Land.

Tentacles, Guns and Sushi…

Trinity Monument, New Mexico

My Review of Eric Lahti’s Henchmen

Evil is that thing that we don’t want to happen to us. If it happens to someone else, someone we don’t agree with, though, it’s justice.

Lahti, Eric. Henchmen (p. 183). Kindle Edition.

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Having stalked—I mean, followed Eric on Twitter for some time, I’ve had the Henchmen saved on my laptop for what seems like an eternity. I’ve been waiting for some downtime to indulge in this gritty action story. Eric’s writing did not disappoint. As I mentioned on Twitter, the best way to sum up this speculative fiction is if Michael Crichton and Stephen King got together and wrote their own version of Aliens crossed with Oceans 11 crossed with Lock, Stock and Two Smoking Barrels. The difference is that Eric provides enough tech to satisfy the geek in me without devolving into writing a text book like some of Crichton’s work. The toughest part about this review is going to be avoiding spoilers, because this is well worth a read and I don’t want to give away the fun parts.

Their Mission?—All the Wrong Things for the Right Reasons

From the opening page, Eric sucks you into this team’s mission to bring down the government. Eric’s intelligent and sarcastic narrator Steven reminds me of the spy Michael Western from the TV Show Burn Notice. Steven is an ex-government agent who has been burned and is now working for “a seven-foot-tall bombshell.” It’s clear from the start that, Eve, the leader of this ensemble is more than she seems, and Eric does a great job of giving just enough to tantalize, but leaving us with questions about her supernatural origins and her real goals. After a successful heist, they decide to celebrate with some naked sushi. When a gang shows up and threatens their “hostess,” they realize the secret carries may be useful to their cause. From there, the ride down the rabbit hole gets wilder with this crew of misfits. Supernatural creatures, government conspiracies and tentacles start coming out of the woodwork—literally.

The Anti-hero

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While anti-heroes have been around for a long time, in recent years, pop culture has seen a surge in popularity in this trope/archetype. In opposition to the squeaky-clean, square-jawed, high moralled characters of the past, the anti-hero is flawed and at times dark. Often times, the anti-hero is more relatable than the perfect hero. The Henchmen does a great job of showing this group of anti-heroes and their motivations for participating in what would be considered treasonous insurrection.

Civil Disobedience

“If the injustice is part of the necessary friction of the machine of government, let it go, let it go: perchance it will wear smooth–certainly the machine will wear out… but if it is of such a nature that it requires you to be the agent of injustice to another, then I say, break the law. Let your life be a counter-friction to stop the machine. What I have to do is to see, at any rate, that I do not lend myself to the wrong which I condemn.”

― Henry David Thoreau, Civil Disobedience and Other Essays

One of the deeper themes in Eric’s book revolves around government corruption, control, and blind obedience to law. He isn’t picking on either political party, but calling out the whole system as being no longer for the people. It is a great talking point in these turbulent times when we have people marching in the street. What is true patriotism?

“Patriotism means to stand by the country. It does not mean to stand by the president or any other public official, save exactly to the degree in which he himself stands by the country. It is patriotic to support him insofar as he efficiently serves the country. It is unpatriotic not to oppose him to the exact extent that by inefficiency or otherwise he fails in his duty to stand by the country. In either event, it is unpatriotic not to tell the truth, whether about the president or anyone else.”

~ Theodore Roosevelt

Henchmen is very relatable in our current state of affairs in this country. I’m not saying let’s go overthrow the government, but his story brings up some great talking points on blind patriotism. It will totally piss off people on the extremes of either party. It’s definitely not a story for the easily offended or politically correct. But if you are in the mood for a gritty, wild adventure in the desert of New Mexico, then this novel (and series) is for you. I can’t wait to dive into the sequel, Arise.

Thanks for reading. I’ll be off the grid for most of August out at the cabin doing construction. Check out my social media pages for construction updates. Coming soon in the review queue is Willie Handler’s, Loved Mars, Hated the Food; and Salen Valari’s The Darkness Within. For my next news letter I’ll be posting a sneak preview from A Drink of Darkness, my paranormal romance/historical fiction set in Dawson City in 1898.

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The legend of Alaska’s Headless Ravine is steeped in blood. Its hunger for human flesh never sleeps, even in the deepest cold of winter. Courage skill and love will be stretched to the limits on the isolated boundaries of The Dark Land.